Saturday, February 14, 2009

Business Correspondence Critique: The Letter


Ever since I've attended ES2007S, I have become more weary of the way I communicate. What is worse, I'm beginning to scrutinise letters, emails and other media used for correspondence to the extent of being a critique. But I guess that will help me with this blog post.


Recently, I received a letter from a local spa company (as a form of complimentary birthday gift) enclosed to a birthday card I sent by my insurance company, which is a well-known, international company. After reading the content of the enclosed letter, I began to question why my insurance company would work with a company which sends such a letter. I have already covered some of the contents of this letter to protect the name of both companies and also my personal particulars.


My critique on this letter will be in my next post.

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